[Comments for Just another vampire's story]

Hellzflame · **Joined:** Sat Dec 22, 2007 3:37 am **Posts:** 447

My first try on creating a story on this forum. Since no one is making a first move, I am doing it. May not be a fabulous story but hope you would enjoy reading it. I have not fully developed the story line, hope you can give suggestions and comments on how to write the story or how the story develops. Please do tell me if I made any mistake in expression, vocabulary or grammer. Hope everyone will get involve in this section more often

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XIX · **Posted:** Fri Jan 02, 2009 1:45 pm

Nice work=]
look forward to your next chapter

H4K · **Joined:** Thu Jul 16, 2009 2:38 pm **Posts:** 157

Great! When will there be a next chapter? about mistakes:
You made a mistake here:
'Please do tell me if I made any mistake in expression, vocabulary or grammer. Hope everyone will get involve in this section more often'
You spell grammar: 'grammar' not: 'grammer'

I really look forward the naxt chapter

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